Saturday, August 27, 2005

an adrenaline rush to write a love poem

i was sittin under a tree in the park..n suddenly an inspiration to write a love poem HIT me. so here it goes.

you make my heart skip a beat,

like my dog sees meat

your face is so nice,

like rat like big rice

why is the sun so hot?(my feeling is agigtated at this moment)

make me sweat a lot

mosquitos r also hungry,(im repeating my agigtated feeling to stress on how agigtated i am)

makes me feel angry

END.

damn im good

5 Comments:

Blogger Le Placard said...

very interesting poem you ve got here....HAHA
it s me by the way.

8:43 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wat a lousy poem u got here... u must have copied from ur lit text right?!? hahaa

8:47 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Not bad for a start though. I believe theres more to come.

Cheers

10:05 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

thx ladies n hommies. i will keep up the good work


-LMY

2:20 AM  
Blogger Ed said...

lao shu ai da mi? hahaha

10:10 PM  

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